I discovered a cave
Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence.
My family and I discovered a cave in the forest and we all decided to go in
Write your story
Sample answer
My family and 1 Oh-m.7rd a ram in the forest and we all derided w go in ... it was a bad decision! The cave was almost completely hidden by plants, but once we pushed them aside we saw that it went deep into the mountain. My dad got out his torch and we followed him into the dark cave. When he shone his light onto the walls, we saw loads of ancient Cave drawings. But that's also when we noticed something extremely large sleeping in the corner. As soon as we realised it was a black bear, we ran towards the entrance of the cave and never returned there again.
Comment
This is a good example of a story. It is clearly linked to the opening sentence and the family's adventure in the cave is described in an interesting manner. Also, the writer has used a good range of vocabulary, grammar and expressions throughout the story while not exceeding the word limit too much (112 words)